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		<title>By: Dear General &#171; BlogLily</title>
		<link>http://bloglily.com/2006/06/09/hooked/#comment-15157</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Dear General &#171; BlogLily]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 16 Nov 2007 18:14:08 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[[...] those who need a translation, this great writing prompt, or hook to a fabulous first novel, reads &#8220;Dear General, I am mailing you five million dollars in this [...]]]></description>
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		<title>By: riihele</title>
		<link>http://bloglily.com/2006/06/09/hooked/#comment-8062</link>
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		<pubDate>Sun, 10 Jun 2007 21:40:57 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Hei Lily.

My favourite hook sentence is this: 
&quot;It is a truth universally acknowledged, that a single man in
possession of a good fortune, must be in want of a wife.&quot;

(Pride and Prejudice by Jane Austen)

It immediately catches your undivided attention and keeps it so right to the end of the book. 
Take care and do keep so well.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hei Lily.</p>
<p>My favourite hook sentence is this:<br />
&#8220;It is a truth universally acknowledged, that a single man in<br />
possession of a good fortune, must be in want of a wife.&#8221;</p>
<p>(Pride and Prejudice by Jane Austen)</p>
<p>It immediately catches your undivided attention and keeps it so right to the end of the book.<br />
Take care and do keep so well.</p>
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		<title>By: SmorgasBen</title>
		<link>http://bloglily.com/2006/06/09/hooked/#comment-132</link>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 14 Jun 2006 15:56:18 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Lily, I liked your list of 100 openers. Working in the law as we do, I got a laugh out of 80:
&quot;Justice?—You get justice in the next world, in this world you have the law.&quot; —William Gaddis, A Frolic of His Own (1994)
I recently came across a quote from Salman Rushdie (I think) on how performers should start with the miraculous or impossible--that way they will have the audience eating out of their hands the rest of the way. 
I think this works for fiction hooks, too. Once the reader wonders &#039;how is that possible?&#039; curiosity lures them along.
For that reason I liked 29:
&quot;Every summer Lin Kong returned to Goose Village to divorce his wife, Shuyu.&quot; —Ha Jin, Waiting (1999)
Because I wonder, how is it possible to divorce your wife every year?]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Lily, I liked your list of 100 openers. Working in the law as we do, I got a laugh out of 80:<br />
&#8220;Justice?—You get justice in the next world, in this world you have the law.&#8221; —William Gaddis, A Frolic of His Own (1994)<br />
I recently came across a quote from Salman Rushdie (I think) on how performers should start with the miraculous or impossible&#8211;that way they will have the audience eating out of their hands the rest of the way.<br />
I think this works for fiction hooks, too. Once the reader wonders &#8216;how is that possible?&#8217; curiosity lures them along.<br />
For that reason I liked 29:<br />
&#8220;Every summer Lin Kong returned to Goose Village to divorce his wife, Shuyu.&#8221; —Ha Jin, Waiting (1999)<br />
Because I wonder, how is it possible to divorce your wife every year?</p>
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		<title>By: Best Blog on WordPress &#187; Writing Strategies For Your Blog - Part One</title>
		<link>http://bloglily.com/2006/06/09/hooked/#comment-129</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Best Blog on WordPress &#187; Writing Strategies For Your Blog - Part One]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 13 Jun 2006 19:53:52 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[[...] In Journalism there&#039;s this thing called a lead that writers use to hook people into the story or in our case the post. The lead or hook will usually give the reader facts right off the bat. Don&#039;t loose your reader right off the bat. [...]]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] In Journalism there&#39;s this thing called a lead that writers use to hook people into the story or in our case the post. The lead or hook will usually give the reader facts right off the bat. Don&#39;t loose your reader right off the bat. [...]</p>
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		<title>By: bloglily</title>
		<link>http://bloglily.com/2006/06/09/hooked/#comment-128</link>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 13 Jun 2006 07:35:10 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Hi RR -- It&#039;s very clear that the Hitchhikers&#039; Guide to the Galaxy must be read RIGHT NOW!  It sounds wonderful.  Cheers, BL]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi RR &#8212; It&#8217;s very clear that the Hitchhikers&#8217; Guide to the Galaxy must be read RIGHT NOW!  It sounds wonderful.  Cheers, BL</p>
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		<title>By: realruth</title>
		<link>http://bloglily.com/2006/06/09/hooked/#comment-126</link>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 13 Jun 2006 07:28:57 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[I&#039;m not sure whether it&#039;s a hook but I absolutely love the line in &quot;The Hitchhikers&#039; Guide&quot; which talks about a spaceship &quot;hanging in the sky like bricks don&#039;t&quot;.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;m not sure whether it&#8217;s a hook but I absolutely love the line in &#8220;The Hitchhikers&#8217; Guide&#8221; which talks about a spaceship &#8220;hanging in the sky like bricks don&#8217;t&#8221;.</p>
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		<title>By: bloglily</title>
		<link>http://bloglily.com/2006/06/09/hooked/#comment-122</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[bloglily]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 12 Jun 2006 16:44:52 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Ingrid --  I will -- I want to be on a planet where the official tour guide is full of funny sentences.  Thanks for the tip.  Best, BL]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Ingrid &#8212;  I will &#8212; I want to be on a planet where the official tour guide is full of funny sentences.  Thanks for the tip.  Best, BL</p>
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		<title>By: Ingrid</title>
		<link>http://bloglily.com/2006/06/09/hooked/#comment-121</link>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 12 Jun 2006 16:21:34 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[What ? You never ever read The Hitchhikers Guide to the Galaxy ? Which planet are you from ? :-)

That book is one big collection of really good (and funny!) sentences. You should read it.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>What ? You never ever read The Hitchhikers Guide to the Galaxy ? Which planet are you from ? <img src='http://s0.wp.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':-)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
<p>That book is one big collection of really good (and funny!) sentences. You should read it.</p>
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		<title>By: bloglily</title>
		<link>http://bloglily.com/2006/06/09/hooked/#comment-114</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[bloglily]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 11 Jun 2006 14:13:18 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Smokey -- I did think, what about nonfiction?, when I wrote this.   But I never, ever thought, &quot;what about textbooks?&quot;  The hook for me would be that if you didn&#039;t read it you&#039;d have an ugly experience when you took your exams.  

I LOVE the excerpt from the Boy Scout Handbook -- “A Scout! What fun he finds in hiking into the woods! He tells North from South by the stars, or East from West by the shadows.”  

it&#039;s so promising!

Hello Silentseas -- You&#039;re right, there&#039;s a lot of pressing going on in that first bit from Lolita, which is so appropriate for Humbert!  You get the feeling Nabokov loved writing this.   I think a writer&#039;s joy in words and in his story really draws a reader in.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Smokey &#8212; I did think, what about nonfiction?, when I wrote this.   But I never, ever thought, &#8220;what about textbooks?&#8221;  The hook for me would be that if you didn&#8217;t read it you&#8217;d have an ugly experience when you took your exams.  </p>
<p>I LOVE the excerpt from the Boy Scout Handbook &#8212; “A Scout! What fun he finds in hiking into the woods! He tells North from South by the stars, or East from West by the shadows.”  </p>
<p>it&#8217;s so promising!</p>
<p>Hello Silentseas &#8212; You&#8217;re right, there&#8217;s a lot of pressing going on in that first bit from Lolita, which is so appropriate for Humbert!  You get the feeling Nabokov loved writing this.   I think a writer&#8217;s joy in words and in his story really draws a reader in.</p>
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		<title>By: silentseas</title>
		<link>http://bloglily.com/2006/06/09/hooked/#comment-110</link>
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		<pubDate>Sun, 11 Jun 2006 08:04:59 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Ohhhh, first lines! One of the most memorable for me is as follows, from the Nabokov novel:

&quot;Lolita, light of my life, fire of my loins. My sin, my soul. Lo-lee-ta: the tip of the tounge taking a trip of three steps down the palate to tap, at three, on the teeth. Lo. Lee. Ta.&quot;

Besides the playful alliteration, Nabokov (and Humbert Humbert) press the name into the readers mind, the adoration, the fixation, everything that HH covets about her. Flat out stunning and a definite hook.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Ohhhh, first lines! One of the most memorable for me is as follows, from the Nabokov novel:</p>
<p>&#8220;Lolita, light of my life, fire of my loins. My sin, my soul. Lo-lee-ta: the tip of the tounge taking a trip of three steps down the palate to tap, at three, on the teeth. Lo. Lee. Ta.&#8221;</p>
<p>Besides the playful alliteration, Nabokov (and Humbert Humbert) press the name into the readers mind, the adoration, the fixation, everything that HH covets about her. Flat out stunning and a definite hook.</p>
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		<title>By: smokey</title>
		<link>http://bloglily.com/2006/06/09/hooked/#comment-106</link>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 10 Jun 2006 21:16:47 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[BL, Thanks for writing another stimulating essay, &quot;Hooked.&quot; 
I didn&#039;t get into this idea of hooks right away since I tend to read non-fiction science books more than fiction. I&#039;ve never understood why I shy away from fiction unless it has something to do with an academic life that was almost entirely math and physics. And here I am a poet. Poetry is math? Hmmm.

But to the point, I did check for hooks in some of the most important books in my life, necessarily non-fiction.

First--The Handbook for Boys, copyright 1945 by Boy Scouts of America, noting in its own introduction, &quot;since first published in 1910 (the Handbook for Boys) has been the Country&#039;s best seller, with the exception of the Bible.&quot; This in itself has considerable hookyness, but nothing in comparison to the beginning of its first instructional chapter.
Chapter 1, What Is A Boy Scout? 
&quot;A Scout! What fun he finds in hiking into the woods! He tells North from South by the stars, or East from West by the shadows.&quot;
Could there be a better hook for a self-improvement book? I don&#039;t know whether it was the stars or the shadows, but something hooked me into going onward to Eagle Scout and 36 merit badges. Or it could have been the hook my mother attached to my collar and led me kicking and screaming.
Second, and these are in descending order,-- from my freshman math book, Analytic Geometry and Calculus, by Longley, Smith and Wilson (all Yale professors), in Chapter I, Cartesian Coordinates. The Straight Line.
1. Introduction. 
&quot;A survey of the problems which can be solved by elementary mathematics (algebra, geometry, and trigonometry) shows that although they are large in number they form a rather restricted class.&quot;

This is a somewhat more subdued hook than appeared in the Boy Scout Handbook, but I did finish the book in one year and got the grades I needed to advance to the hooks in Differential Equations and Theory of Calculus. (Sadly, I can&#039;t find the links to those right now.)

Third, and actually difficult to rate lower in compellingness with the previous hook in my math book, Elements of Physics, by Smith and Cooper (Ohio State University professors), copyright 1957--

Chapter 1. Physics and Measurement
1.1 &quot;What is Physics? In its broadest sense physics is that branch of knowledge which describes and explains the material world and its phenomena.&quot; 
If this doesn&#039;t seem to be hook enough, one is definitely compelled by the second sentence, &quot;In terms of this sweeping definition, all the other physical sciences may be regarded as branches of the basic science--physics, which a century ago was known as natural philosophy.&quot; 

Fortunately, I was swept, after only five pages, to the method for converting 60 miles per hour to 88 feet per second, and in the blink of five years to relativity and quantum mechanics.
 
Thanks again for resteering my attention to this most important tactic in writing--a compelling beginning,
Smokey]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>BL, Thanks for writing another stimulating essay, &#8220;Hooked.&#8221;<br />
I didn&#8217;t get into this idea of hooks right away since I tend to read non-fiction science books more than fiction. I&#8217;ve never understood why I shy away from fiction unless it has something to do with an academic life that was almost entirely math and physics. And here I am a poet. Poetry is math? Hmmm.</p>
<p>But to the point, I did check for hooks in some of the most important books in my life, necessarily non-fiction.</p>
<p>First&#8211;The Handbook for Boys, copyright 1945 by Boy Scouts of America, noting in its own introduction, &#8220;since first published in 1910 (the Handbook for Boys) has been the Country&#8217;s best seller, with the exception of the Bible.&#8221; This in itself has considerable hookyness, but nothing in comparison to the beginning of its first instructional chapter.<br />
Chapter 1, What Is A Boy Scout?<br />
&#8220;A Scout! What fun he finds in hiking into the woods! He tells North from South by the stars, or East from West by the shadows.&#8221;<br />
Could there be a better hook for a self-improvement book? I don&#8217;t know whether it was the stars or the shadows, but something hooked me into going onward to Eagle Scout and 36 merit badges. Or it could have been the hook my mother attached to my collar and led me kicking and screaming.<br />
Second, and these are in descending order,&#8211; from my freshman math book, Analytic Geometry and Calculus, by Longley, Smith and Wilson (all Yale professors), in Chapter I, Cartesian Coordinates. The Straight Line.<br />
1. Introduction.<br />
&#8220;A survey of the problems which can be solved by elementary mathematics (algebra, geometry, and trigonometry) shows that although they are large in number they form a rather restricted class.&#8221;</p>
<p>This is a somewhat more subdued hook than appeared in the Boy Scout Handbook, but I did finish the book in one year and got the grades I needed to advance to the hooks in Differential Equations and Theory of Calculus. (Sadly, I can&#8217;t find the links to those right now.)</p>
<p>Third, and actually difficult to rate lower in compellingness with the previous hook in my math book, Elements of Physics, by Smith and Cooper (Ohio State University professors), copyright 1957&#8211;</p>
<p>Chapter 1. Physics and Measurement<br />
1.1 &#8220;What is Physics? In its broadest sense physics is that branch of knowledge which describes and explains the material world and its phenomena.&#8221;<br />
If this doesn&#8217;t seem to be hook enough, one is definitely compelled by the second sentence, &#8220;In terms of this sweeping definition, all the other physical sciences may be regarded as branches of the basic science&#8211;physics, which a century ago was known as natural philosophy.&#8221; </p>
<p>Fortunately, I was swept, after only five pages, to the method for converting 60 miles per hour to 88 feet per second, and in the blink of five years to relativity and quantum mechanics.</p>
<p>Thanks again for resteering my attention to this most important tactic in writing&#8211;a compelling beginning,<br />
Smokey</p>
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		<title>By: fencer</title>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 10 Jun 2006 20:10:42 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[This is a good topic... here&#039;s a quote from Newlove on &#039;first paragraphs&#039;: &quot;Suddenly a great sentence steals at us like a woman dancing the tango.&quot;

Of course, there&#039;s &quot;&#039;Twas a dark and stormy night...&quot; (Isn&#039;t there a competition and a book on that somewhere for the worst opening sentences?)]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This is a good topic&#8230; here&#8217;s a quote from Newlove on &#8216;first paragraphs&#8217;: &#8220;Suddenly a great sentence steals at us like a woman dancing the tango.&#8221;</p>
<p>Of course, there&#8217;s &#8220;&#8216;Twas a dark and stormy night&#8230;&#8221; (Isn&#8217;t there a competition and a book on that somewhere for the worst opening sentences?)</p>
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		<title>By: bloglily</title>
		<link>http://bloglily.com/2006/06/09/hooked/#comment-104</link>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 10 Jun 2006 18:23:42 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Yikes!  PS:  I really liked your recent post, by the way.  I like hearing your thoughts on writing.  Best, BL]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Yikes!  PS:  I really liked your recent post, by the way.  I like hearing your thoughts on writing.  Best, BL</p>
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		<title>By: fencer</title>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 10 Jun 2006 18:11:17 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Here&#039;s one I like from the opening to John Brunner&#039;s The Sheep Look Up (a sadly unrecognized and brilliant book): 

&quot;Hunted?
By wild animals?

In broad daylight on the Santa Monica Freeway? Mad! Mad!&quot;]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Here&#8217;s one I like from the opening to John Brunner&#8217;s The Sheep Look Up (a sadly unrecognized and brilliant book): </p>
<p>&#8220;Hunted?<br />
By wild animals?</p>
<p>In broad daylight on the Santa Monica Freeway? Mad! Mad!&#8221;</p>
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		<title>By: bloglily</title>
		<link>http://bloglily.com/2006/06/09/hooked/#comment-98</link>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 10 Jun 2006 13:37:43 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[&quot;which more or less exactly failed to please the eye.&quot;  That&#039;s really good.  I&#039;ve never read the Hitchhiker&#039;s Guide to the Galaxy.  It sounds like I should.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>&#8220;which more or less exactly failed to please the eye.&#8221;  That&#8217;s really good.  I&#8217;ve never read the Hitchhiker&#8217;s Guide to the Galaxy.  It sounds like I should.</p>
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