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	<title>Comments on: Submitting, Part 2</title>
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		<title>By: bloglily</title>
		<link>http://bloglily.com/submitting-july-december-2008/#comment-23402</link>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 27 May 2009 16:38:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Oh, Ms. Jellie, I&#039;m so sorry to hear you&#039;re feeling that way.  My advice:  get it out there, and start writing the next thing.  Don&#039;t wait!  xoxox]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Oh, Ms. Jellie, I&#8217;m so sorry to hear you&#8217;re feeling that way.  My advice:  get it out there, and start writing the next thing.  Don&#8217;t wait!  xoxox</p>
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		<title>By: thejellies</title>
		<link>http://bloglily.com/submitting-july-december-2008/#comment-23391</link>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 25 May 2009 17:31:50 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[I&#039;m thankful for this &quot;submitting&quot; section of your blog, especially for the February 6, 2009 entry.  Because today I feel like such a loser.  I haven&#039;t gotten any rejection yet, I only just submitted my first three poems to a contest and already I feel bad.  Thanks for listening, and thanks for putting your own feelings and efforts out there so I don&#039;t feel all alone in this new effort of mine.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;m thankful for this &#8220;submitting&#8221; section of your blog, especially for the February 6, 2009 entry.  Because today I feel like such a loser.  I haven&#8217;t gotten any rejection yet, I only just submitted my first three poems to a contest and already I feel bad.  Thanks for listening, and thanks for putting your own feelings and efforts out there so I don&#8217;t feel all alone in this new effort of mine.</p>
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		<title>By: mariegauthier</title>
		<link>http://bloglily.com/submitting-july-december-2008/#comment-22957</link>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 05 Mar 2009 14:31:28 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[I &lt;i&gt;do&lt;/i&gt; like this sort of thing--thank you very much! xo]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I <i>do</i> like this sort of thing&#8211;thank you very much! xo</p>
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		<title>By: bloglily</title>
		<link>http://bloglily.com/submitting-july-december-2008/#comment-22890</link>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 21 Feb 2009 21:36:39 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Why Becca, that&#039;s such a lovely thing to say!  When I have news, I&#039;ll be sure to let you know.  xoxoxo]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Why Becca, that&#8217;s such a lovely thing to say!  When I have news, I&#8217;ll be sure to let you know.  xoxoxo</p>
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		<title>By: musingsfromthesofa</title>
		<link>http://bloglily.com/submitting-july-december-2008/#comment-22883</link>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 21 Feb 2009 13:16:38 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[I haven&#039;t checked here for ages but I am glad that you are still submitting and writing. I liked the story you sent me enough that I want to read more. It was months ago, and yet i still remember some details and the feel of the story (and I find short stories tough, I generally prefer novels). So there is certainly a reader here waiting for your writing to land in the world.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I haven&#8217;t checked here for ages but I am glad that you are still submitting and writing. I liked the story you sent me enough that I want to read more. It was months ago, and yet i still remember some details and the feel of the story (and I find short stories tough, I generally prefer novels). So there is certainly a reader here waiting for your writing to land in the world.</p>
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		<title>By: bloglily</title>
		<link>http://bloglily.com/submitting-july-december-2008/#comment-22808</link>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 13 Feb 2009 02:51:53 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Marie -- I find them endlessly fascinating too.  And except for the dark and cynical submission stories -- the ones where the system is totally against the writer and always will be -- encouraging as well.  I&#039;m glad you check in here.  It&#039;s nice to think of you and Lokesh, two of the most encouraging people I know, as my audience.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Marie &#8212; I find them endlessly fascinating too.  And except for the dark and cynical submission stories &#8212; the ones where the system is totally against the writer and always will be &#8212; encouraging as well.  I&#8217;m glad you check in here.  It&#8217;s nice to think of you and Lokesh, two of the most encouraging people I know, as my audience.</p>
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		<title>By: mariegauthier</title>
		<link>http://bloglily.com/submitting-july-december-2008/#comment-22806</link>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 12 Feb 2009 22:10:03 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[I&#039;m so glad you haven&#039;t stopped talking about your submissions.  Even though you&#039;re fiction &amp; I&#039;m poetry, I find submission stories endlessly fascinating, and encouraging.  So thank you for continuing to put it out there! xo]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;m so glad you haven&#8217;t stopped talking about your submissions.  Even though you&#8217;re fiction &amp; I&#8217;m poetry, I find submission stories endlessly fascinating, and encouraging.  So thank you for continuing to put it out there! xo</p>
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		<title>By: bloglily</title>
		<link>http://bloglily.com/submitting-july-december-2008/#comment-22801</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[bloglily]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 12 Feb 2009 21:10:27 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Lokesh, You are so lovely!  Thank you.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Lokesh, You are so lovely!  Thank you.</p>
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		<title>By: Lokesh</title>
		<link>http://bloglily.com/submitting-july-december-2008/#comment-22778</link>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 10 Feb 2009 23:15:54 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[[Re: Feb 6th]

As usual, I&#039;m moved by your insight and dedication - and delighted to see such activity across the BL network.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[Re: Feb 6th]</p>
<p>As usual, I&#8217;m moved by your insight and dedication &#8211; and delighted to see such activity across the BL network.</p>
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		<title>By: bloglily</title>
		<link>http://bloglily.com/submitting-july-december-2008/#comment-22721</link>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 02 Feb 2009 18:11:59 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Hello Ben and welcome!  

First, good luck with your submissions.  I am glad my own experience is useful.  It is not my intention to moan or complain about this process (which is, after all, a voluntary one!), but more to record what it took for me to get my work out there and into the hands of readers.  I think it&#039;s interesting, and it&#039;s also a good motivator to keep going because this record keeps me accountable.

Second, good luck with that novel!  As for the James Jones fellowship, like you, I assumed that what the readers for the fellowship wanted was a synopsis of the book.  My method, in all its embarrassing lack of sophistication was this:  I googled &quot;how to write a novel synopsis,&quot; or some string of words like that, and then I found several descriptions of how to write a two page version of this document, which is a creature all its own, as it turns out.  I read somewhere between four and six of the articles I found from that search, weeding out those websites containing articles that struck me as themselves poorly written, and so unlikely to be good sources of advice.  And then I printed out the articles about synopsis writing that seemed to come from the most professional sources and read them over and over until they made sense.  And then I summarized my book.  The book was complete, which made the synopsizing job a lot easier.  One thing I remember is that a synopsis is not a chapter by chapter breakdown at all, but more a description of what happens, what that leads to and how, in the end, it is all wrapped up beautifully.

Let me know how it all turns out and, again, the best of luck to you.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hello Ben and welcome!  </p>
<p>First, good luck with your submissions.  I am glad my own experience is useful.  It is not my intention to moan or complain about this process (which is, after all, a voluntary one!), but more to record what it took for me to get my work out there and into the hands of readers.  I think it&#8217;s interesting, and it&#8217;s also a good motivator to keep going because this record keeps me accountable.</p>
<p>Second, good luck with that novel!  As for the James Jones fellowship, like you, I assumed that what the readers for the fellowship wanted was a synopsis of the book.  My method, in all its embarrassing lack of sophistication was this:  I googled &#8220;how to write a novel synopsis,&#8221; or some string of words like that, and then I found several descriptions of how to write a two page version of this document, which is a creature all its own, as it turns out.  I read somewhere between four and six of the articles I found from that search, weeding out those websites containing articles that struck me as themselves poorly written, and so unlikely to be good sources of advice.  And then I printed out the articles about synopsis writing that seemed to come from the most professional sources and read them over and over until they made sense.  And then I summarized my book.  The book was complete, which made the synopsizing job a lot easier.  One thing I remember is that a synopsis is not a chapter by chapter breakdown at all, but more a description of what happens, what that leads to and how, in the end, it is all wrapped up beautifully.</p>
<p>Let me know how it all turns out and, again, the best of luck to you.</p>
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		<title>By: ben</title>
		<link>http://bloglily.com/submitting-july-december-2008/#comment-22720</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[ben]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 01 Feb 2009 18:47:10 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Dear Lily,

I came upon your blog while looking for more information on the James Jones First Novel Fellowship.  I LOVE this blog.  Thank you for putting it out there; I&#039;ve been writing for years but am a novice at submitting.  I&#039;m into my third month of concentrated submissions, not counting the 30+ queries on my first novel.  Your writing only inspires me to up my game.  Thank you!

Maybe you can help other readers and I with regards to the James Jones Fellowship.  I&#039;m not clear on what they want in an outline.  At two pages, do they mean synopsis?  Or do they mean chapter-by-chapter breakdown?  Would you mind sharing with us what format you followed?

ben]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Dear Lily,</p>
<p>I came upon your blog while looking for more information on the James Jones First Novel Fellowship.  I LOVE this blog.  Thank you for putting it out there; I&#8217;ve been writing for years but am a novice at submitting.  I&#8217;m into my third month of concentrated submissions, not counting the 30+ queries on my first novel.  Your writing only inspires me to up my game.  Thank you!</p>
<p>Maybe you can help other readers and I with regards to the James Jones Fellowship.  I&#8217;m not clear on what they want in an outline.  At two pages, do they mean synopsis?  Or do they mean chapter-by-chapter breakdown?  Would you mind sharing with us what format you followed?</p>
<p>ben</p>
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		<title>By: thejellies</title>
		<link>http://bloglily.com/submitting-july-december-2008/#comment-22703</link>
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		<pubDate>Sun, 25 Jan 2009 20:49:40 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Have you read the Stephen King book, &quot;On Writing--A Memoir of the Craft&quot;?  I liked it, and I think you might, too.  The book is encouraging...as well as... other things.  I have summarized it in two posts:  http://thejellies.wordpress.com/2009/01/04/stephen-king-on-writing-first-glance/
and
http://thejellies.wordpress.com/2009/01/22/finished-the-stephen-king-book/

Best Wishes, from an aspiring writer who would love to be doing as well as YOU are.  :-)  Marmalade]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Have you read the Stephen King book, &#8220;On Writing&#8211;A Memoir of the Craft&#8221;?  I liked it, and I think you might, too.  The book is encouraging&#8230;as well as&#8230; other things.  I have summarized it in two posts:  <a href="http://thejellies.wordpress.com/2009/01/04/stephen-king-on-writing-first-glance/" rel="nofollow">http://thejellies.wordpress.com/2009/01/04/stephen-king-on-writing-first-glance/</a><br />
and<br />
<a href="http://thejellies.wordpress.com/2009/01/22/finished-the-stephen-king-book/" rel="nofollow">http://thejellies.wordpress.com/2009/01/22/finished-the-stephen-king-book/</a></p>
<p>Best Wishes, from an aspiring writer who would love to be doing as well as YOU are.  <img src='http://s0.wp.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':-)' class='wp-smiley' />   Marmalade</p>
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		<title>By: Lokesh</title>
		<link>http://bloglily.com/submitting-july-december-2008/#comment-22581</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Lokesh]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 13 Dec 2008 17:33:17 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Amen.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Amen.</p>
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		<title>By: openpalm</title>
		<link>http://bloglily.com/submitting-july-december-2008/#comment-22518</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[openpalm]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 07 Nov 2008 03:57:08 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[&quot;On to novel number 2.&quot;

Yes!
-op]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>&#8220;On to novel number 2.&#8221;</p>
<p>Yes!<br />
-op</p>
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		<title>By: bloglily</title>
		<link>http://bloglily.com/submitting-july-december-2008/#comment-22325</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[bloglily]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 10 Sep 2008 03:00:42 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[OP -- Thank you for that!  You are right about where time and energy should be put.  

Lokesh,  But you are royalty -- and very kind.  Thank you.

Marie -- I just  heard from Columbia.  Thanks.  No thanks.  meh]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>OP &#8212; Thank you for that!  You are right about where time and energy should be put.  </p>
<p>Lokesh,  But you are royalty &#8212; and very kind.  Thank you.</p>
<p>Marie &#8212; I just  heard from Columbia.  Thanks.  No thanks.  meh</p>
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